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Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 3 — Band 7 model essay

163 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

The increase in the production of consumer goods damages the natural environment. What are the causes, and what can be done?

消费品生产增加损害自然环境。原因是什么?可以采取什么措施?

Band 7 model answer

It is often argued that the environmental damage caused by rising production of consumer goods. Although consumer goods improve comfort and create employment, I believe that the current pattern of production is environmentally unsustainable.

A major reason is that mass production uses energy, water, metals, and plastic at a very high rate. In practical terms, fast fashion can require large amounts of water and create mountains of discarded clothing. This can lead to pollution from factories and waste sites. In addition, repairable products can reduce pressure on natural resources.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages should not be ignored. advertising encourages people to treat new purchases as a normal form of happiness. Another concern is that manufacturers may design goods to break or become outdated quickly. These problems may reduce the value of the policy or behaviour if no safeguards are provided.

For these reasons, I would argue that the causes are cultural as well as industrial. Policy should reward durability, recycling, and honest environmental labelling.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 3 model answer is 163 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 7 answer presents a clear, well-developed position with a good range of vocabulary and complex sentences, and only occasional errors.

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