Typehush IELTS Writing · Typing Practice

Cambridge IELTS 20 · Test 3 · Band 8

Cambridge IELTS 20 Test 3 — Band 8 model essay

161 words · 11 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Many people accept online tracking in exchange for convenience. Others think privacy is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

许多人为了便利接受线上追踪;另一些人认为隐私更重要。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 8 model answer

The question of whether online tracking and privacy is widely debated in modern society. While its appeal is easy to understand in modern life, I am convinced that the real question is how to manage it wisely.

The most compelling reason is that tracking can make digital services faster and more personalised. This matters because shopping apps and maps often work better when they know user preferences. Moreover, it can also create broader social benefits. These effects can continue to influence individuals and communities beyond the immediate situation.

Admittedly, too much data collection can expose people to manipulation and abuse. Yet this weakness can be reduced if privacy rules should limit data collection and improve transparency. Furthermore, a balanced approach would allow people to keep the benefits without letting the harms dominate.

On balance, it is valuable, but only when responsibly managed. Provided that those rules are consistently enforced, this approach offers a stronger and more sustainable answer to the issue.

Practise typing this essay →

Frequently asked questions

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 20 Test 3 model answer is 161 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

What makes this a Band 8 IELTS essay?

A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

How do I use this model essay to improve my IELTS writing?

Read the model to see how a high-band answer is structured and argued, then practise typing it on Typehush to build the speed and accuracy the computer-based IELTS Writing test demands.