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Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 2 — Band 7 model essay

168 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some experts believe it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

一些专家认为,孩子在小学而不是中学开始学习外语更好。这种做法的优点是否大于缺点?

Band 7 model answer

It is often argued that children beginning to learn a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Although early lessons may add pressure to children who are still developing first-language literacy, I believe that the benefits usually outweigh the drawbacks with good teaching.

A major reason is that young learners are generally receptive to new sounds and patterns. In practical terms, songs, stories, and speaking games can develop natural pronunciation without heavy grammar study. This can lead to greater confidence in later language learning. In addition, early exposure also encourages curiosity about other cultures.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages should not be ignored. poorly designed lessons can confuse children or waste school time. Another concern is that teacher shortages may lead to repetitive and inaccurate instruction. These problems may reduce the value of the policy or behaviour if no safeguards are provided.

For these reasons, I would argue that the policy is valuable only when quality is protected. Primary schools should keep lessons playful, oral, and professionally guided.

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