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Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 2 — Band 8 model essay

188 words · 11 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some experts believe it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

一些专家认为,孩子在小学而不是中学开始学习外语更好。这种做法的优点是否大于缺点?

Band 8 model answer

The question of whether children beginning to learn a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school is widely debated in modern society. While introducing another language too early can burden pupils if the curriculum is already crowded, I am convinced that an early start offers stronger long-term value when implemented with restraint.

The most compelling reason is that younger children often acquire pronunciation and intonation with less self-consciousness. This matters because their willingness to imitate unfamiliar sounds can create habits that older beginners struggle to develop. Moreover, early language learning can also broaden cultural awareness and pattern recognition. These effects can continue to influence individuals and communities beyond the immediate situation.

Admittedly, weak teaching may turn a promising policy into shallow memorisation. Yet this weakness can be reduced if teachers are trained and lessons are built around communication rather than tests. Furthermore, a balanced approach would allow children to gain a foundation without sacrificing core literacy.

On balance, the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages under well-designed conditions. Provided that those rules are consistently enforced, this approach offers a stronger and more sustainable answer to the issue.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 2 model answer is 188 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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