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Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 4 — Band 7 model essay

167 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think the increasing use of technology has made people more socially isolated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有人认为科技使用增加让人变得更加社会孤立。你在多大程度上同意或反对?

Band 7 model answer

It is often argued that whether increasing technology use has made people more socially isolated. Although technology can encourage passive scrolling and reduce in-person conversation, I believe that it is not inherently isolating; habits and design matter more.

A major reason is that communication platforms can preserve relationships across distance and time zones. In practical terms, families separated by work or study can share daily life through messages and video calls. This can lead to greater emotional continuity despite physical distance. In addition, online groups can also support people with rare interests or difficulties.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages should not be ignored. digital contact may become shallow if it replaces shared activities and attention. Another concern is that algorithms can trap users in private entertainment bubbles. These problems may reduce the value of the policy or behaviour if no safeguards are provided.

For these reasons, I would argue that technology is a tool whose social effect depends on intentional use. Users should set boundaries and prioritise meaningful communication.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 4 model answer is 167 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 7 answer presents a clear, well-developed position with a good range of vocabulary and complex sentences, and only occasional errors.

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