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Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 4 — Band 8 model essay

180 words · 11 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think the increasing use of technology has made people more socially isolated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有人认为科技使用增加让人变得更加社会孤立。你在多大程度上同意或反对?

Band 8 model answer

The question of whether whether increasing technology use has made people more socially isolated is widely debated in modern society. While the architecture of many platforms rewards distraction and solitary consumption, I am convinced that technology amplifies existing social habits rather than simply destroying them.

The most compelling reason is that digital communication can sustain weak and strong ties across geographical distance. This matters because a migrant worker can remain emotionally present in family life through regular video contact. Moreover, online communities may give isolated individuals access to recognition and advice. These effects can continue to influence individuals and communities beyond the immediate situation.

Admittedly, constant mediated interaction can reduce patience for slower face-to-face intimacy. Yet this weakness can be reduced if users deliberately reserve time for embodied relationships and focused conversation. Furthermore, a balanced approach would allow technology to extend social life without replacing its deeper forms.

On balance, technology can either isolate or connect, depending on design and discipline. Provided that those rules are consistently enforced, this approach offers a stronger and more sustainable answer to the issue.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 4 model answer is 180 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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