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Cambridge IELTS 10 · Test 4 · Band 6

Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 4 — Band 6 model essay

125 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening, and how should it be dealt with?

世界许多地区儿童和青少年犯罪增加。原因是什么?应如何处理?

Band 6 model answer

People have different opinions about the increase in crime among children and teenagers. Some people believe that family problems and social pressure can push young people towards crime, while others think that schools and communities can prevent crime through support. In my view, youth crime should be handled with prevention and fair punishment.

One main reason is that undefined. This is important because undefined. Another point is that families also need help with discipline and supervision. These advantages can make the situation better for many people.

However, there are some problems with this view. undefined. If this problem is not managed well, they may return to crime after release.

Overall, I believe society should combine responsibility with rehabilitation. Schools, parents, and police should work together.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 4 model answer is 125 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

What makes this a Band 6 IELTS essay?

A Band 6 answer addresses the task with a clear position and adequate vocabulary, but development is uneven and it contains noticeable grammar errors that do not prevent understanding.

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