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Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 4 — Band 8 model essay

185 words · 11 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening, and how should it be dealt with?

世界许多地区儿童和青少年犯罪增加。原因是什么?应如何处理?

Band 8 model answer

The question of whether the increase in crime among children and teenagers is widely debated in modern society. While communities have a legitimate right to protection from serious youth crime, I am convinced that the most effective response addresses the conditions that produce offending.

The most compelling reason is that adolescent crime often reflects weak attachment to school, family, and lawful opportunity. This matters because where status is gained through gangs or online intimidation, punishment alone rarely changes incentives. Moreover, structured mentoring and practical training can replace destructive peer approval with competence. These effects can continue to influence individuals and communities beyond the immediate situation.

Admittedly, harsh detention may expose young offenders to more experienced criminals. Yet this weakness can be reduced if serious crimes are punished while minor offences trigger supervision, counselling, and restitution. Furthermore, a balanced approach would allow accountability to coexist with the possibility of reform.

On balance, youth crime should be treated as a social warning as well as a legal problem. Provided that those rules are consistently enforced, this approach offers a stronger and more sustainable answer to the issue.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 4 model answer is 185 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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