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Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 4 — Band 7 model essay

161 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening, and how should it be dealt with?

世界许多地区儿童和青少年犯罪增加。原因是什么?应如何处理?

Band 7 model answer

It is often argued that the increase in crime among children and teenagers. Although serious offences require consequences to protect the public, I believe that prevention is more effective than relying only on punishment.

A major reason is that many young offenders come from unstable families, poor schools, or unsafe neighbourhoods. In practical terms, a teenager without supervision may seek status in a violent peer group. This can lead to more theft, aggression, and antisocial behaviour. In addition, counselling, sports, and vocational training can create alternative identities.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages should not be ignored. a purely punitive system can harden young people rather than reform them. Another concern is that however, ignoring crime also damages victims and public trust. These problems may reduce the value of the policy or behaviour if no safeguards are provided.

For these reasons, I would argue that the response must be firm but developmental. Authorities should use community programmes, family support, and rehabilitation for first-time offenders.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 10 Test 4 model answer is 161 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 7 answer presents a clear, well-developed position with a good range of vocabulary and complex sentences, and only occasional errors.

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