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Cambridge IELTS 12 · Test 1 · Band 6

Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 1 — Band 6 model essay

129 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

In many countries, children do some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as positive, while others think it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

在许多国家,儿童从事某种有偿工作。有人认为这是积极的,有人认为这是错误的。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 6 model answer

People have different opinions about children doing paid work. Some people believe that paid work can teach responsibility and money management, while others think that children should focus on education and healthy development. In my view, small and safe work may help, but regular labour is harmful.

One main reason is that undefined. This is important because undefined. Another point is that part-time work can build confidence and practical skills. These advantages can make the situation better for many people.

However, there are some problems with this view. undefined. If this problem is not managed well, children may fall behind at school or become tired.

Overall, I believe paid work is acceptable only when it is limited and safe. Laws should protect children from long hours and dangerous jobs.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 1 model answer is 129 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

What makes this a Band 6 IELTS essay?

A Band 6 answer addresses the task with a clear position and adequate vocabulary, but development is uneven and it contains noticeable grammar errors that do not prevent understanding.

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