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Cambridge IELTS 12 · Test 1 · Band 7

Cambridge IELTS 12 Test 1 — Band 7 model essay

157 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

In many countries, children do some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as positive, while others think it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

在许多国家,儿童从事某种有偿工作。有人认为这是积极的,有人认为这是错误的。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 7 model answer

It is often argued that children doing paid work. Although some work can teach discipline and independence, I believe that children's education and wellbeing must remain the priority.

A major reason is that light work can expose young people to responsibility in real situations. In practical terms, helping in a family shop during holidays may teach punctuality and customer service. This can lead to better maturity and financial awareness. In addition, earning small amounts can also make children appreciate their parents' effort.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages should not be ignored. work becomes harmful when it replaces school, sleep, or play. Another concern is that poor families may depend on child income and allow exploitation. These problems may reduce the value of the policy or behaviour if no safeguards are provided.

For these reasons, I would argue that the issue depends on scale, safety, and purpose. Governments should permit light work for older children but strictly ban exploitative labour.

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