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Cambridge IELTS 9 · Test 1 · Band 6

Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 1 — Band 6 model essay

127 words · 12 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society, while others believe school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为父母应教孩子如何成为社会中的好成员,另一些人认为学校才是最佳场所。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 6 model answer

People have different opinions about whether parents or schools should teach children to become good members of society. Some people believe that parents are children's first moral teachers, while others think that schools provide a wider social environment. In my view, both are important, but parents should build the first foundation.

One main reason is that undefined. This is important because undefined. Another point is that schools can then teach cooperation with different people. These advantages can make the situation better for many people.

However, there are some problems with this view. undefined. If this problem is not managed well, children may not receive consistent guidance.

Overall, I believe parents and schools should work together. Families should teach values, and schools should practise them in group life.

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How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?

IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 1 model answer is 127 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 6 answer addresses the task with a clear position and adequate vocabulary, but development is uneven and it contains noticeable grammar errors that do not prevent understanding.

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