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Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 1 — Band 8 model essay

199 words · 11 sentences · IELTS Writing Task 2

Writing Task 2 prompt

Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society, while others believe school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人认为父母应教孩子如何成为社会中的好成员,另一些人认为学校才是最佳场所。讨论双方并给出观点。

Band 8 model answer

The question of whether whether parents or schools should teach children to become good members of society is widely debated in modern society. While schools are essential arenas for citizenship because they bring children into contact with rules and diversity, I am convinced that the earliest and deepest moral formation usually happens inside the family.

The most compelling reason is that children absorb social norms through repeated observation long before formal lessons begin. This matters because how parents handle disagreement may teach more about respect than a classroom poster ever could. Moreover, schools can refine these habits through teamwork, discipline, and exposure to difference. These effects can continue to influence individuals and communities beyond the immediate situation.

Admittedly, families vary widely in time, education, and emotional stability. Yet this weakness can be reduced if schools deliberately teach social responsibility and involve parents in the process. Furthermore, a balanced approach would allow home influence and public education to reinforce rather than contradict each other.

On balance, good citizenship is a shared project, with parents laying the foundation and schools widening it. Provided that those rules are consistently enforced, this approach offers a stronger and more sustainable answer to the issue.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 requires a minimum of 250 words. This Cambridge IELTS 9 Test 1 model answer is 199 words, comfortably above the minimum without padding.

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A Band 8 answer fully addresses the task with well-supported ideas, a wide and natural range of vocabulary, skilful cohesion and very rare errors.

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